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March 2007  

 
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Let’s Get Personal ...

As a real estate professional you are just that…a professional. But you also have a unique personality. And too many of you are subjugating your individuality on your Web sites under a lot of tired prose about “providing excellent service” and “knowing the market.” C’mon folks. If you want to capture a potential client’s attention in a few seconds, you’ve got to reach out and touch someone (at least figuratively).

That’s not going to happen with what I call the “cookie cutter” approach to Web copy. In my line of work I see lots of real estate Web sites, and I’ll estimate that nearly 90% of them are interchangeable, except for their names and photos.

On the landing page, more often than not, I am greeted with, “Welcome to my Web site.” That’s nice, but uninspiring. As a browser, I expect that I am welcome to click on your site. But what’s going to make me click again…and again; in other words, get me hooked on wanting to know more about you? You have to say something that makes me believe you can handle my transaction better than any of the other Realtors on the Internet.

In order to do that, you need to tell me something about yourself that is out of the ordinary. Have you lived in the neighborhood for twenty years and raised a family there? That might pique my interest if I’m moving into the area with children. Do your listings sell, on the average, 20% faster than others in your region? I’d certainly want to interview you about selling my home. If you’re a newbie, turn that into a positive. Tell me you’ll work 30% harder than the average Realtor and give me the specifics about how you accomplish that.

Also, don’t be afraid to add a little fun to your Web site. It’s true that people do business with people they like. So, make yourself likeable online. If you’re a dog lover, talk about your pooch and add some personal notes about the best places to walk a dog, pet supply stores, and vets. Use some creativity to work hobbies and interests into your copy to help browsers see you as a three-dimensional person, not just someone who can help them buy or sell a home. Don’t overdo it though; one “theme” and a brief mention are enough.

Even when you’re working on the nuts and bolts pages of your Web site, try to keep them user-friendly and inviting. Almost everyone has a page titled, “Frequently Asked Questions,” or just “FAQs.” What’s going to make viewers want to open that page? Why not arouse their interest by calling it, “The Ten Most Important Things Buyers Want to Know,” or “The Questions Sellers Ask Most Often.”

Another way to connect with potential customers is to use language that’s appropriate for your target market. Do a little research on the demographics. If you’re angling for luxury home buyers, your copy should be sophisticated and refer to aspects of the million-dollar-home lifestyle. On the other hand, young first-time buyers will relate to a more casual copy approach. Think of what makes your knowledge and expertise outstanding to your market and how potential clients will see it benefiting them. Whatever style you adopt, keep it consistent throughout the site.

Remember that the Internet is an interactive medium and, as the Web site owner, it’s up to you to engage potential clients. “Internet Empowered Consumers” (as Michael Russer has so aptly named them) have a choice whether to read or not read your site. You can attract and keep clients’ attention with a well written site that not only reflects your professional skills and expertise, but clearly states the advantage of using your services. Finding your voice, and using it creatively on your Web site, will help you make that connection.

Lois Feinstein

Lois H. Feinstein produces powerful and compelling Web copy, marketing materials, newsletters and brochures for Realtors® and other business professionals. She is Chair of the Real Estate Virtual Assistants (REVA) Copywriting Guild and a member of the International Virtual Assistants Association, and has written for a number of magazines including 5280 and Denver Woman. Her business, I Can Do That!, www.i-cando-that.com, is based in Denver, Colorado.

 

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