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August 2007  

 
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Let's Have Some Fun! ...

Friends, Realtors, Countrymen…lend me your ears…and eyes…and throw in a rubber nose, while you’re at it. Why are we all so darn serious? I say, “lighten up!” How about adding a little levity to your copy? It won’t hurt, I promise. And you might even entice some new clients who will be intrigued by your sense of humor. After all, selling real estate is not a deadly serious business. It’s serious business, of course, but not on par with balancing the federal budget (which could be considered, by some, to be an ongoing joke. But I digress…)

Using humor is one way to differentiate yourself from the masses of real estate professionals all saying the same thing in the same way. I’m not suggesting that you add “yuks” to all your communication material, but a judicious use of levity can add some spark and help set you apart. An example: a client recently asked me to write a “re-introduction” letter to her farm. She wanted to let them know that she is going to be sending them information about the local market and to remind them about her business. Since she’d been out of touch with them for quite a while, I decided to make her letter an amusing one.

Instead of starting out with, “Well it’s been a while since we’ve been in contact,” I began with a “Did you know?” list of fun facts about her state, which I picked up from the web site www.legendsofamerica.com. I chose some of the wackier items, e.g. that it was illegal to go fishing while riding a giraffe’s back! After listing three interesting tidbits, I added, “Did you know that (agent name) is the new construction expert in (community name)?” I also used some clip art illustrations (freebies from http://office.microsoft.com/en-us/clipart/default.aspx). Now, she has a fun and memorable letter that’s bound to capture readers’ attention, which didn’t cost any more than writing a conventional letter.

Try popping a little wit onto your web site. It can be done through copy or by developing a graphic character who acts as a guide. If being funny is really not your style, try for a conversational mode. Select one section of your site where you write from a personal point of view, putting yourself in your reader’s shoes. Anything you can do to make yourself accessible to potential clients makes them more likely to establish contact with you.

Another of my clients sends out Just Sold cards with the headline, “Your neighbors got what they deserved” as the only copy on the front. Who could resist turning that over? On the back he explains how his agency helped that seller get top dollar for his home. Brilliant! (I’m not tooting my own horn—he wrote it.)

So, don’t be afraid to lighten up and make your material a little more memorable.

Lois Feinstein

Lois H. Feinstein produces powerful and compelling Web copy, marketing materials, newsletters and brochures for Realtors® and other business professionals. She is Chair of the Real Estate Virtual Assistants (REVA) Copywriting Guild and a member of the International Virtual Assistants Association, and has written for a number of magazines including 5280 and Denver Woman. Her business, I Can Do That!, www.i-cando-that.com, is based in Denver, Colorado.

 

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